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Poem a Day Challenge, Day 21

Posted in April Poetry Month by Rachel on the April 21st, 2009

Today was Tuesday, so of course Robert Brewer on Poetic Asides offered us a 2-fer. We could either write a haiku or write about the haiku, or do both. And, I tried for both. So, here’s my attempt:

1) Haiku

Thirty years, I’m told.
School friends line up to greet me.
When did I get old?

2) About Haiku (using a Chinese form)

Delicate poetic form travels through time,
Sometimes revered as it passes to each generation.
The lady of poise wears her yukata like a uchikake.
Her geta clacking quietly as the most beautiful haiku.

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